Free
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I was scared the first time;
The second I rode by night;
By the third he had my heart;
After the fourth it was just a steady climb.
By the third he had my heart;
After the fourth it was just a steady climb.
The wind blew through the trees;
Creating a harmony among others;
The sun shone high and bright;
Hear the wind blow free;
A chestnut mane whipped around;
Sending flurries of snow everywhere;
There were two, two were free by heart;
They were bound;
I wrote this poem with the second verse of "Aladdin", but added on to it for The Cornet Crazie's poem contest at Treble Clef! I am only entering one poem! It is about me and Aladdin, of course!
May I copy and paste this poem onto my website, The Writer's Advice, as an example of good poetry? I will give credit to MoonLight Creations and paste a hyperlink to that page so that people will come to your blog, etc. Casey, I will give you credit, too. It's okay if you say no. I just thought it was a great piece.
ReplyDeleteSure. You can do that!
ReplyDeleteI like your poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Zara!
ReplyDeleteAnd Wildflower? Can I have a link to your website?
Oh. Zara. Go to this link -
ReplyDeletewww.one-lives-life-full.blogspot.com
That is another one of my websites!